Free time, but at what cost?

Sometimes, I find myself lost in thought, wondering what it would be like to share a quiet moment with someone who sees the world through a similar lens. The simplest things can be the most profound—a shared smile, a brief exchange that lingers. 🌌✨ Just thinking about those connections that make the days feel a little brighter. 💫Kendra Lust 🥵🥵

What can i do to improve this? It feels low quality for some reason. Is it the lineart? Or the shading?

Requesting critique. Something STILL looks off. I’ve tried so many times but i can figure out how to color/lineart.